Hey Simeon. Thank you for sharing your work. Are you enjoying the novel? I think it is really sad how so many children were left fatherless. Are you looking forward to going out to the Mine Site? I sure am as I love going outside of the classroom to learn new things. Keep up the hard work. Miss H
Kia ora Simeon great work on the mines description.
ReplyDeleteThe best thing about it was how much you described about the mines. Next time just make it more colorful and eye catching instead of white and red.
Great work from Alex
Hey Simeon.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your work. Are you enjoying the novel? I think it is really sad how so many children were left fatherless. Are you looking forward to going out to the Mine Site? I sure am as I love going outside of the classroom to learn new things.
Keep up the hard work.
Miss H